Does "First Year Commemorative" sound ok for the give away shotgun?

[Okuma]

Does "First Year Commemorative" sound ok for under the logo on the receiver?

 

[unclear.six]

That sounds so professional I thought this was an ad for some NRA merchandise haha.

 

[drtybykr]

"First Anniversary Commemorative" sounds better IMHO.

 

[JimK]

Sounds fine to me. Anything else would just make it too long.

 

[Okuma]

I've got about ten minutes to figure this out

 

[skducke]

"First Anniversary Commemorative" sounds better IMHO.

THIS

 

[Okuma]

Let's get a quick vote, post which one you like best, First Year or First Anniversary

 

[CZ82man]

First Year Commemorative sounds fine

 

[NWSharpshooter]

Anniversary

 

[xGAxBlueChip]

"First Anniversary Commemorative" sounds better IMHO.

I like both anniversary sounds better but Jim has a point it might be to long