You have an extra space between seeing and the comma that followed it. You also have an extra space between your first quotation mark and the word looking. Your syntax in the phrase "More people need to thicken up the skin and learn to take a little constructive critisism" seems to be off as I don't quite understand what you mean by "up the skin". Lastly, you misspelled the word "criticism". Now, I'm not being condescending but just trying to lend you a little constructive criticism, that's all.I am still trying to figure out how you can tell "tone" in a chat forum. I dont remember seeing , " looking down my nose harshly at you" in italics anywhere in his post. Maybe if you took it as harsh you need to check the image in the mirror. More people need to thicken up the skin and learn to take a little constructive critisism. IMHO.
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