That's why it is a crime for a person who is not a lawyer to draft a trust for you. One should either do it himself (and blame himself for the consequences) or hire a lawyer to do what lawyers do.
That's because trusts are complicated legal instruments governed by a lot of arcane and very technical statutory and common law rules going back for centuries, and it also varies from state to state. Your self-created trust might pass BATFE muster as a "legitimate trust under state law," but...